Saturday, July 16, 2005

why can't i get over hills

can't
we all hide
white boys
in toy
railroads

cause there isn't threat
to bungle in this jungle

Mr. missed her trouble
might well very flute
you away back

i too
can think
what you're
reading

2 comments:

Chaz said...

metapoesía... Me gusta el final...
Siento que tiene un caracter onda, el climax ubica al lector frente a frente con el yo lírico...


Si me escuchase Manuel Picado me mata

Ryan said...

a picado, le mando mis saludos. ;)