hay gente que son aguaceros
otras personas son lloviznas
algunas son lluvias soleadas
algunos son hasta tornados
pero huracanes...
son raros..
se miran desde la costa...
y se admiran
porque ante un huracán
hay que guardar silencio.
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I dig the last two lines. They have nothing and everything to do with the poem. the break brings to the poem a more practical relevance, something that destroys any ability to bastardize the poem and use it as a quote.
Not sure if that's making sense...just my take.
Love how, bastardize the poem sounds...
Come to think of it, that couldn't be more true
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